Breathtaking as always.

I just got finished with an extensive poetry project, and it's nice to see some poetry that doesn't take much analyzing for once. _;

Nice job.

Yeah, short but sweet. This -rocks-. The last line's so beautiful. :) Sad.. but.. kind of defiant in a way. I like it.

A strong message in so few words. What cool symbolism! Four lines or 40 lines, with those two qualities, you can keep a reader interested. I like it.

You were right, the s-b-s poems are usually the best. Yours is perfect, as always.