This is wonderful. I love how the poem unravels from utter despair to a sense of hopefulness. This theme occurs quite frequently in your writing, and I must say that I enjoy it immensely. Although everything’s not all hunky-dory, there is the concept of hope, which is a truly powerful thing. Very nice work.

spazz

Defenitely an outstanding poem. Really good job. One of those poems that just happens, probably, to be this good. So very well done. A hundred points to you!