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| Steven Charles 2006-07-23 ch 1,  | abuseWow, that's nice. I like the feeling of "forget everything" in there. Atleast that's what I get from it. P.S. Yes, I am a guy =) |
| brightflash2 2006-01-21 ch 1, | abuseWHE! I'M BACK!And reviewing once again... Cool. Different, but cool. I like the returning to "i'm flying" or some form of it. And of course, you have to have the wind in your hair. IT's just not fun otherwise...i like the "squeeze the brake...cops on the mountain." That part was cool - it sort of turns the entire poem into a miniature story...happy, happy.. PROBLEM...who cares, whe happy! Sorry. :) (but hey - you missed me, right? Who else would give you this sort of a review? ) :) |
| briannathewriter 2005-12-24 ch 1, | abuseThere's just one confusing line in this poem. You might want to look at: "Twenty-five. No". That is just a little confusing. |
| Eve Hopeless 2005-12-22 ch 1, | abuse*cough* Umm, my fiction is up now, Petit. See I told you, and yes, i do like this one, it has an odd rhythm when your read it yourself. As Always, Eve |