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fontanellemonster 2005-12-22 . chapter 1
beautiful, the formatting really adds to the flow of it. loved the imagery of the music...it really struck a chord. ha.(sorry)
lackluster 2005-12-21 . chapter 1
"(she wishes upon a red starthat .moves. across her horizon)" such a pretty image. i really love it.
Awkward Sylence 2005-12-21 . chapter 1
I kept seeing the bold italicized and underlined letters and kept thinking there was some kind of code in there. Or maybe you were just making the poem pretty, I don't know. Very well done, either way!

Awkward Sylence
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