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| randomperson 2006-09-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseReally fragmented and all over the place; like a real fever dream, it skips erratically around, dancing on the edges of reason. Interesting ending. Very nice! Great style of poetry! |
| jojoba-music-girl 2006-09-07 ch 1,  | abuseThis is just...amazing..Keep up the good work! |
| Samara-chan 2006-02-04 ch 1, | abuseWow. Enigmatic, poetic, and just a tad insane. The last line came as a shock. I really liked this. |
| Scelestus 2005-12-22 ch 1, | abuseWow, I really enjoyed this. The beat was a little hard to get into at first, but in my mind it was like a drum. Thanks for posting this here, it rather made my day! Happy writings! |