the ending was ok, it could have been alittle bit more fighting on the mean ** (cant spell her name lol) part but other than that i think it was a very lovely story

i love this story.
idont see how people like rachel can be so mean and live with themselves.
im glad katie and seth are happy now.
thanx for making this story ^_^

Great ending! I'm glad it wasn't like in other romantic stories where they have to leave each other, or one of them dies, etc. But yeah, great story. I hope you write more stories later on!

that was an INCREDIBLE story. I love reading anything that has to do with people who are visually impaired or blind, seeing as I'm visually impaired myself. GREAT JOB! I was sad to see it end and I would LOVE to see this as as film.

Aw...it's a shame it's the end. But on a happy note it was a happily ever after for everyone...accept that bratty Rachel - nasty character.

I love how through the diary entry you have written the big event that happened between Katie and Seth. Neat work!

Brilliant chapter - as usual :D
Its nice to find out Rachel hasn't shown up I this chapter, just a shame to realise she'll probably be in the next to stir up trouble.

Brilliant chapter! :}
It does make me wonder what Rachel is up to, probably something vicious.
I'm actually glad the chat is in a phone call context, if in messenger context it might turn out a bit messy/confusing.

After three years. Congrats with finishing the story! I've been an avid reader of this story since I opened this account. Sorry the review is late but I do hope you get this. I'm sure you have excelled as a writer and I plan to read some more of your stories.

The ending was absolutely touching. Take care, Austere.

A cute chapter. Quite tragic how Katie lost her sight, indeed quite tragic. But hey, she has a boyfriend (its official from here on..right?!).

Another interesting chapter, you know I'm starting to think of jUlia as some sort of guardian angel for Katie. lols

A triple helping of Katie's daily diary...brilliant! Interesting to hear that Katie seems to be having doubts...

Well I think it's a very nice filler, simple and easy to understand. Its quite casual too.

As usual a brilliant chapter!

no offense, but this ending sucked. not in what happened, but the suddenness of the ending. i hate telling people how to write, i really do, but you're not supposed to have the ending after the climax, you're supposed to have a falling action first. it was a really good chapter, but a crappy ending. i am not trying to flame you, i really like this story, i am just trying to give you honest feedback. i just would have liked to see a couple more chapters before the ending.