unbelievably well-written. I can't believe I'm not previously acquainted with your work. perhaps I am? I'm not sure. there are too many good writers on this website. the way you closed it was so. ah. poignant. I've been reading through your stuff and you are ridiculously talented (plus you've got some really good titles.)

Amazingly well written. I would not have been able to guess what the title meant through just a glance. Keep writing!

Je pourrais vous avoir pour le petit déjeuner, le déjeuner, et le dîner.

great descriptions, it flowed like poetry.

and thanks for your constructive criticism on 'underneath a desert sky' an overlook on my part :)

The description in this is incredible. It's like poetry.