 simpleplan13 2006-01-17 . chapter 1interesting.. love the title |
 Jezsh 2006-01-04 . chapter 1I know this...seems familiar to me. A beautiful beautiful thing to read, whether it is to be interpreted or not. |
 in theory 2005-12-30 . chapter 1"English adverbs decorate my tongue.." So gorgeous. |
 do not resuscitate 2005-12-27 . chapter 1original. i love it. i love the image. |
 rustupidorjustnotbright 2005-12-26 . chapter 1short and beautiful, great job. |
 a lonely september 2005-12-26 . chapter 1this was incredible, so poetic & beautiful. great job. |
 twenty-second seduction 2005-12-22 . chapter 1beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and this is gorgeous. |
 Sharakinpaix 2005-12-22 . chapter 1I'm probably wrong, but this sounds like a statement about the Canadian rift between French descendants and British descendants. The last line about flower petals gathering in someone's hands is a beautiful picture, but also conveys the frustration of waiting for a long, long time. |
 X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2005-12-21 . chapter 1Wow. Very meaningful poem, I love this. Keep it up. |