Too bad this looks abandoned: I think I would have enjoyed this when I was in my teens...just about as much as I enjoyed it now. It's really adorable. I'm curious where you'll go with this... :)

Shoot, pressed Submit Review too soon... So, here I am again.
Onwards to the second chapter!
Ack, I hate Shakespeare, Old English >.

I love your first line, it caught my attention and gave me a nice first impression. In your prologue, you a a nice job of setting up her determination for the rest of the story.
You do a nice job of setting up your scenes, and I can really picture what's happening.
I love your style of writing, it's easy to read and it keeps my attention. :)
Wade seems amazing, by the way. I love the sensitive type who writes poetry. Though, I think reciting Poe would be a little creepy... He was just a little... odd.
One thing I loved in main character, Lieve, was the fact that she seemed so real. She's got her flaws, the whole no-guy-will-ever-break-my-heart-ever-again-and-they're-all-scum mindset, and she's so shortsighted and close-minded to any other opinion. She stereotypes them all too, which isn't very nice, but it's a very realistic human trait, which makes her so much more real. I loved that.

just a note, i honestly expected more, you showed absolutely none of the hurt-scared person you were all over during the first paragraph. its like one minute 'Guys are Pigs, I am NEVER coming near one again' and the next ' OMG he is so cute, i wonder if he's taken' Where is the ' Guys are pigs'?? it was there for maybe 3 paragraphs. not enough for me to build a storyline. but other than that, if you can work on it and try not to make it seem like its really rushed, you have something good going at it would be a shame to lose it.
sincerly,
Angel

Wow, this is another great story! More please!

Great story and plot. All the flashbacks and stuff makes the story interesting. Can't wait to see what'll happen. Update soon.

Hey!

Good story so far!I really like this one too!

So, what's the history between Charles and Lieve? What did he do to her? I have two theories. 1. he took her virginity and then dumped her 2. he raped her or something along those lines.

I don't know. You tell me. Update soon on this other fantastic story of yours!!

Good sentence structure and grammar & mechanics. This story has a good start and it sounds like an interesting plot. I will keep reading.

You're just an overall good writer.

hey that was pretty good!

im in suspense...

Not bad...not bad! I'm interested in seeing where this is going...so update soon! :)

-MM

Aw...and poor Lieve.

Great intro! I like it. Is she a senior in college or high school though? And whats she look like?