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| La Gitane 2006-03-08 ch 1,  | abuseBrilliant last line. It's veering on irony, and draws the link between between everything... The death penalty has me shuddering. |
| Tr APeze-sWiNGer 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abuselove it, it reflects my views perfectly |
| poet tree 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuseLast three lines = bitter truth. Good job! |
| Abortive Measures 2005-12-23 ch 1, | abuseI can't remember if you're on my favourites list or not but.. you are now! As a former advocate of the death penalty (yeah, I know, a commie in favour of capital punishment) I must say this is very convincing. And it contains that nice little connontation between captial punishment and capitalism. |
| Decollage 2005-12-22 ch 1, | abuseHence capitalistic society... Not economy, society. I can't say I agree with the death penalty- it seems it could be too easily abused, and hypocritical, really, considering the fancy words they use to describe 'atrocious animals' who murder. But it's supposedly not murder if it's carried out by the government. Who decides who lives or dies? In any case, exquisite work, yet again. I like the use of capitalization, the seperation of verse, the description of death. Brilliant. |
| gold against the soul 2005-12-22 ch 1, | abuseI agree, and consquently liked this. It is also very well written, in a blank, hard, truthful kind of way. Nice style. Keep writing, comrade. ;) - gold against the soul |