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| Mrs. Jim Halpert 2008-05-09 ch 1,  | abuser u going to re-post the rest of the story? |
| Sydney-J 14 2008-05-08 ch 2, | abusei cant wait till u write more |
| heavengurl899 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseI'm putting this on story alert cause you should probably update :D |
| A. Akira 2008-04-29 ch 2, anon. | abuseI generally don't plead with authors to update on fictionpress, b/c I get the fact that you have lives and that writing is a hobby/pass-time, and that you post out of the goodness of your heart... But please, please, PLEASE will you consider updating? I'm dying of anticipation here. Seriously. I check every month to see if you've updated. Which is kind of sad, cuz you'd think I would have better things to do... Anyhoo, if you're too buzy, have hit a wall of writers block, etc. would you mind posting the older version of this story back up? I haven't read it, but you've made reference to it so I was just wondering if that was a possibility. Thanks and I'm really enjoying your work so far (obviously!). |
| blackvespers 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseI could have sworn you completed this story earlier in the past year or so, yet the computer clearly shows you've only finished two chapters. Why did start rewrite it all? Anyhow, the story is forever memorable |
| Miss Toadstool 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abusehah! boobs for brains. I love it. and he compares her to the mom in the omen! I love it. funny first chapter :) can't wait to see more! |
| Ms Gunslinger 2008-03-30 ch 2, | abuseA Must Read. |
| Evalize 2008-03-30 ch 2, | abuseIt's sad that I just found this now :( You have a great beginning and I love your writing style. Keep up the great work. Hope you haven't given up on this story :) |
| Pink and Black Sharpies 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseGreat story, Please do update. |
| sweetblondie16 2008-03-25 ch 2, anon. | abusehaha please write more!! this is actually really good! youre writing is so much better than most others! |
| mia5081 2008-03-14 ch 2, | abusePlease update soon! I loved it =) ~Mia |
| DOMOxKUN 2008-03-12 ch 2, | abuseI hope you update soon! |
| Scottish Princess 2008-03-07 ch 2, | abuseWow. I love it! Really! When's the next chapter coming? |
| tere-fied 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting story. I like it. Enjoyable thing to read. keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Please update soon! :D |
| bluewindfire 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseprops for this chapter. MUCH better than ur old one, now it sounds far more sophisticated, older, more mature i guess. the only problem is that towards the end it starts to fall a little, gets a little cheesy. i think u could have ended it a little better. |