** ending to a somewhat patchy, stoic story. there was little life and feeling in this, and it was a bit abrupt and flippant.

I thought Jackie is a wanker, for blow'n Will off(not in the good way) on his b-day. But then again Will is a ** XD loved it!

I never know what to say when I finish reading a complete story...the fact that someone can just create something out of thin air and have it affect my life and and stuff, it's really mind boggling. Your story was amazing, and I'll definetly remember it for a long time. Thanks.

I loved the story =) but I am wondering if Will will (hehe Will will) stay with Jackie or not
~Mia

I really enjoyed reading this story, and I hope one day you will be able to finish it. Right now seems to be a good end, but a part of me must know what could happen next.I liked you story line a lot. And how Will seems like a real person...I so want to know about his past though.

This was a very good story!^_^ I love Will!^_^ Jackie not so much though... I think he's an **... But I see there's another story where Will's the main person!^_~ Maybe he'll find someone better there!^_^ I hope so! I'm gonna read it ASAP!^_^ Very good job!^_^

- Kiz

Wow, this was a great read. Will was so sadly...needy. And the foster parents were awesome. All your characters were well-written and this story has an intelligent way about it that makes me envious. Faving, and I'm checking out more of your works.

wow. great story. I love how all your characters are somewhat flawed. It makes them so much more...human, or something.

Awesome story. But then so is every story you take the time to write. Very realistic. The character's lives are not so perfect and pretty as every other author portrays their characters to be. ^_^ In short- you do a damn good job of 'keeping it real'. Keep up the good work!

just wanted to let you know that your (fairly) silent stalker still loves reading and admiring your work.

Hi, I reviewed before, but I had forgotten my password, so I had to review anonymously as Vickie. But I rememebered it, so now I signed in. This story is awesome and is most definately going on my favs list! Keep pu the great writing!

yay!

but but there will be soemthing else right? anotehr story right? you can't leave e like this!!"! argh will T_T

Jackie makes me extremely anxious for Will's safety.

Um ... Jackie doesn't sound all that nice here. LOL! But then again, he is trying to deal with Will's protective parents. Though lying again, or omitting the details anyway, isn't going to get him far with Mike. Great chapter!