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Reviews For: It Matters Not

Seth Triskellion
2006-06-17
ch 1,
yeesh. tis fairly upsetting. I liek the duality verses, but the writing was more cathartic than poetic. good to see you're writing though
fontanellemonster
2005-12-22
ch 1,
loved it. the structure fit the tone really well, kind of angry and confused, but the short stanzas reflecting the decisiveness or something. one for the favourites.
myno
2005-12-22
ch 1,
excellent, poignant, violently pretty.
bread and circuses
2005-12-22
ch 1,
Whoa, amazing! I have felt like this. I can't even say how much. The last line is so perfect. Favourites, definitely.
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