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| Seth Triskellion 2006-06-17 ch 1, | yeesh. tis fairly upsetting. I liek the duality verses, but the writing was more cathartic than poetic. good to see you're writing though |
| fontanellemonster 2005-12-22 ch 1, | loved it. the structure fit the tone really well, kind of angry and confused, but the short stanzas reflecting the decisiveness or something. one for the favourites. |
| myno 2005-12-22 ch 1, | excellent, poignant, violently pretty. |
| bread and circuses 2005-12-22 ch 1, | Whoa, amazing! I have felt like this. I can't even say how much. The last line is so perfect. Favourites, definitely. |