A VERY apocolyptic feel. It creates and inspires powerful imagery with every stanza. The only part that I felt didn't quite fit was the ending, 'The Sea of My Destruction.' Every other line was filled with numerous descriptions, while this last one felt a bit...dry.

Then again, that's just me. =D You're the author in the end, right? I really enjoyed this poem, and look forward to reading more of your work!

wow.. extremely powerful and sad... amazingly described.. awesome job

Hey, just checking through the just in box, and saw your name. Decided to leave a few reviews ;p

I really like the way you brought the setting to life with such morbid words and other things. The mood was really good, and the vocabulary was advanced, but not too hard. I like it. I'll check some more of your new stuff after school.

-M