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| sarzonwheels 2008-02-27 ch 1,  | abusedelicious. lovely. more positive adjectives (i could go on and on). i liked everything about it. simplistic yet complex (does that make sense?) |
| Nestegg 2006-04-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseNow this I like. I like happy stuff - give me happy stuf |
| Diretto Vertigo 2006-03-18 ch 1, anon. | abusewhat a pretty poem! my friend said it reminded her of me, haha. needless to say, I am sort of bohemian (and blindsiding) and born on a tuesday as well. wonderful job, i love it. |
| boys kiss girls 2006-03-14 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is awesome. "Tuesday's child has far to go". Your work is great. =) |
| ode to a firefly 2006-03-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautifull written. It kind of reminds me of a friend of mine. =) ~Christine~ |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-01-20 ch 1, | abuseLovely word choice and placement. "leading revolutions-with a butterfly net", excellent two lines. This really has a great tone to it. |
| mormonboy 2006-01-16 ch 1, | abuseI love it. It is great. This is a great explanations, a profound explanation, of love. |
| from beneath the bell jar 2006-01-12 ch 1, | abuseI love the way you write - it's so different, creative, and expressive. I wish I could know what you were thinking as you wrote. I love the line: leading revolutions with a butterfly net. |
| White Tea and Ginger 2006-01-11 ch 1, | abuseM, simple gorgeous. |
| Grey Eyed Oblivion 2006-01-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was intresting, I loved the images from this one :) |
| method acting 2006-01-07 ch 1, | abuseHullo, long time no...talk? type? whatever. I like this. I know a person who writes on this site whose penname is Tuesday Child because of that bibical referance in some document? I'm not very religious. Whatever. So, yes, reminded me of that, obviously. I also wrote a poem entitled Tuesday child, but I'm still working on it. It's not post-worthy yet. It's very different though. Mine's longer, but I feel yours is more powerful. I love the last stanza. It's very powerful. Very good job. Ncie to hear form you again. |
| agirlnamed-aly 2006-01-04 ch 1, | abuseThe imagery in this poem was just ... Wow. Very well done. The girl you write about really comes alive; her ethereal presence echoes a sort of profound innocence and surprising simplicity, yet she is aware of complex things beyond our comprehension. Sort of like a goddess. Basically I loved it. Hehe. |
| mezzie 2006-01-03 ch 1, | abuseI think your writing might be a new addiction for me. It's just so good at hitting the core of thingsleading revolutions with a butterfly net - what an image...I love rain mezzie |
| Sarah-Brighteyes 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I love the flow of this. 70's flower child flowing. I loved it. Your format was nice as well, it helped remind me of almost a fleeting moment. I like how you have someone so enchanting making the scene in this, pondering such a deep quetion. I really enjoyed it. |
| Jezsh 2005-12-29 ch 1, | abuseall of this is wonderful...the alliteration of 'beautifully bohemian' coupled with the italic/spacing, and the idea of the girl with her butterfly net. Simple and whimsical, lovely. |