Reviews for brighter than you thought

emily is awesome 2005-12-24 ch 1, anon.	abusemeri chrisumasu! ^_^ okay, so, technically speaking here, it's christmas eve, but i don't know how to say that in japanese! hee hee! i liked the poem! it was all...inspirational and stuff. yeah... totally. eheh... anywho, i missed once upon a matress >_
fontanellemonster 2005-12-22 ch 1,	abusei liked the title. it fits the tone of the poem well, especially the first two lines. nice work.
SoonToBeMe 2005-12-22 ch 1,	abuseI like it I like it. Very well written. I like the idea, the word choice, everything. The only thing I can say is I don't know if I like that separation at the end of the poem of the words "I could" from the rest of the sentence. It seems like an unnecessary pause. Other than that I love it. If you really want to change the title I would call it BEAUTY YET UNDISCOVERED although that might be a tad overdramatic it still rolls off the tonge a little easier than "brighter than you thought". Anyway good job. Would you mind reviewing something of mine?