"The next few days passed uneventfully as autumn slowly transformed into winter"

It's writing like this that I really enjoy! oh and Alia, we don't ly get a definite description do we, but she's not-- da da duh- human! an update would be nice :). -Ama

I remember this story from a while back, did you ever continue with this? I thought for some reason there were more chapters. Anyway, I wanted to say that you are an excellent writer and should really think of continuing :). I also like your choice of character names-- quite original. hoping for an update. -Amalynne

Hm...I liked the old prologue, but that's just me. I like it, but I don't know what Alia looks like from what you said in this chapter...add some more specific details about what she looks like and I won't have any more constructive criticism to give you for THIS chapter(note the emphasis on this).

Satie