Wow, another one I like. I'd ** slap someone if they tried to manipulate me that way, can't kill a baby with a slap to the face for the mommy I'm sure. I'm all for it's their choice though, I prefer they choose to keep it and if they don't want it, adoption, but I ultimately, it's their decision and none of my business.

This was well written, I like your usage of words. XD

everyone's so split up by the pro-choice pro-life thing. i am pro-choice. abortion is wrong when it is used to manipulate someone though.

Amazing. :D The last line was absolutely perfect.

-Sally Can Wait

your best poem so far

this reads so musical. . . it's lovely and very sad.

Strangely enough my mother and I, yes, it's weird, were discussing a situation like this.

It is a sick, sick world.

so cruel, twisting and deceitful; everything seems like a lie after reading this.

~* noelle

very interesting point of view. i never thought of women keeping a men with a baby. the first lines kill. i love the placements of the (shh, shh).

incredible. i really enjoyed this. i loved the contrast between the first & second verse.

This flows like a song. It's gorgeous.