I really liked that! Kudos!

wow...that was soo pretty! and sad, but still its pretty!

That's cool; I like how the story does tell of her wings turning black. Angels can't live on this place; not compatible for them. It's too dark; too depressing for beings of written. Love it

I always loved the idea of black angel's wings... ::wanders off to draw a picture of it:: Thank you for the inspiration.