Very Exquisite, like the structure and free verse. Very very nice job.

This is really well done, a little dragged on in the end, but with a good effect. The first four lines are great, they realy draw you in - this poem will not disappoint.

Much love and never stop writing!

XOXkissXofXdeathXOX

wow...I mean--WOW.That was truly incredible...How did you write something so breath-taking...?That should most definitely be published. It's beautiful.I would try to give you so many other words to express my opinion on this poem, but, unfortunately, I am not a thesaurus...nor do I have one with me...I'm sorry...so, for the timebeing, I'll just say it was really really REALLY good...I hope that works!!

This is the most beautiful thing i've read in a long time.

It's really quite amazing.

That was amazing