I like. It's cute, very cute. When Shin called her eyes "carp eyes," is it like a half-circle with a dot in the middle and lines down like a sun?

Ah interesting so far. Dunno what else to say... since I'm bad at commenting in reviews. I look forward to the next chapter.

I love your story. It's very original and the way you write is so clear and fluent. I love all the characters in this story, especially Suki and Shin! Can't wait for the next chaapter.

~W.B.Crystal

Thanks for letting me know you updated! xD I was so excited, I came here quickly and of course, read!

I should really stop assuming what's going to happen! xD (remembers my last review, and this chapter did not go like my prediction). But that's a good thing, because it keeps me on my toes! =3

Shin needs to stop confusing her! xD

The part at the Pururu Cafe was cute~~ I didn't realize it was a reference to MODERN ALICE. I haven't read that story in such a long time, I forgot! xD BTW I loved that story too~!

Oh, and congrats on college (I start late August xD), and good luck finishing the next chapter! ^^

lol i did notice all that stuff. im very glad to say you did not loose your touch!

i took a little time before reviewing because i wanted to reread everything from the start and immerse myself again in the story. you kept the flow good and nothing seams...un-realistic in the way the characters handle themselves. one thing that gets me though is that i don't have a complete picture of her firmly in my mind at first she's cute then she's bland and the next is hidden striking couture like beauty ( o love that!) i couldn't help but smile when you brought up visual kei and i laughed at the yakuza...i love pandapple! um i have a keychain of him i hook to a belt loop whenever i go out of the house kind of like a cute quardian.

i'm so glad you updated and that you decided to prolong shin's confession. a lot of people have a tendancy of having one character they can't get out of thier mind and sort of force that character into all thier stories in some way and im so happy you didn't do that they are each individuals. :D

i wish u luck on your writing!
A Dark White Rose

Was she still wearing the clothes from the fashion show to Pururu Cafe?

xD Keep up the good work, girl.
I'm absolutely amazed at how you can come back into the writing cold turkey (in the other chapters),
And still be able to write as godly (

Hey!

This is like one of the cutest chapters, like ever! Ha-ha, it was all so authentic and Kyohei's so amusing. I mean don't get me wrong, I totally think Shin and Suki deserve each other, but I know someone kind of like him, and it's so funny comparing the two.

Let's see...there were somethings in this chapter um...I can message you them if you want. Or like correct them and send that to you. Because you seem pretty busy. So whatever you want. ^^

LOVED IT!

-Kaiyako K.

Wow. You write really well! I couldn't tell I was reading the last chapter you had put up! Is Kyohei some sort of player? He seems to know a lot about girls. And I guess that Suki does really look pretty. I like her personality, not like the usual heroines who are all preppy and own the world. So far, I really like your work!

-gasp- You're alive!

Yayy, an update. =D That bit with the maid at the end was so funny. And awesome. xDD And I liked the confrontation between Suki and Shin.

But, noo. Your style's gotten a lot more polished! Yeah, I saw the MODERN ALICE ref. xDD It amused me.

-gaasp- Only 4 more chapters left?! -glomptackle- Update. Son.

That's so funny, I don't remember getting an alert that this story was updated. o_O At all. Which sucks because I was missing out on your FABULOUS STORY! Dx Ugh ...

anyway, darn cliffhangers!! I loved Suki in this chapter--she was totally out of character after doing that modeling. She was so bold! =D

Though I read this awhile ago, I just got around to reviewing it, so the memories are a little blurry. But I remember I absolutely loved this chapter--if it's Shin at the end, he's so going to deserve seeing Suki kissing another man! >D

But if it's not, Suki is going to be mighty embarrassed (not to say that she won't be lol).

Anyway, keep it coming! I don't mind how long I have to wait! This story is just too good to stop reading~

That was a great ending for the chapter!! I want to know if Shinichi is going to come in!! Write soon :)

Hey!

Woah, really great story! It's adorable and dramatic at the same time, and I really love all your characters their superb!

There are some grammatical things, but they're very minor. Most of them are just typos anyways.

Well, Keep up the good work!

-Kaiyako K.

Good story so far! Keep it up! :D

Hey!

I just started reading your story, and I really like it so far. But there were somethings I noticed:

~Then I stood up quickly and grabbed my camera which was resting on my I take a picture of your hands?” I stuttered slightly
-I think you mean:

Then I stood up quickly and grabbed my camera which was resting on. "May I take a picture of your hands?” I stuttered slightly

~“ I told you! It’s really ugly. I wasn’t ready. ”
-No space after or before quotation marks.

~“ Witch.”
-Again here

Great Work! I really do like where your plot is heading! ^^ Can't wait to read more!

-Kaiyako K.