OMG I am so proud of you Maddie! SO SO SO SO FREAKING PROUD!


YOU WROTE YOUR FIRST GOOD ENDING!

What are you going to do next, jazz girl?
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Vira

Very humorous; great job on keeping that same tone running all the way through the story. I loved some of the random pieces, like about Tamagachi pets... I had completely forgotten about those.

Some of it seemed a little forced, though, and there were a few points where the far-fetchedness started getting to me - like about Rick just going along with it... I don't know.

But overall a cute, funny story.

oo i love purple contacts! and the '90s! you did a great job capturing what a real teenage conversation is like. none of it sounds stilted. i love the name "Sanity"! hmm.. maybe one of my poor kids will be named that in the future.. ironically he or she will be driven insane by the constant playground torment, lol.

So, Charity, Sanity, and...that other person didn't get in any trouble? At all? Or were they one of the few interrogated and then given detention? Ah...Liberty is the other one and I should have read further ahead before I wrote down random thoughts. Darn...the whole plan didn't work. The whole point was to get outta exams. Oh well. It was prolly still a ton of fun...and Sanity and Pete got together. But...what about Charity? She HAS to get a guy! Uh..wouldn't people notice Carl in Pete's backyard? Cuz then he'd get in trouble. Oh well.

That was a lovely story. This is the point where I'd normally ask you to update. But unfortunately, this was the epilogue. Now, was this truly how you wised it to end, or did you just want it over with? Just wondering...

Luvs and Hugs, your devoted fan, ~Nicole~

This story just gets better and better!

i can't believe Sanity and Pete were like that though...tisk tisk lol.

OMG! That is...wow. Um...yea. This is called bad timing. Or good timing. That is just so...wow. Only, it screws all chances of Charity getting Pete. I think in my reviews I got Liberty and Charity mixed up, but I'm not sure. Whatever. That was...interesting. Oh boy. They are gonna get in SO much trouble if they try to drive there. Wow. Who names a car Melvin? That's just...odd. At least name it something that's...not Melvin.

Oh...suspenseful ending. That was a good chapter. Update soon please!

Luvs and Hugs, ~Nicole~

This is kind of juvenile, but it's a good idea. The fact that you even have 11 chapters of this story speaks some kind of dedication, which is certainly admirable. Keep it up.

I wonder what will happen after this .. I really like it. Keep going !

It seems too good to be true.

This is about the best story I've read on fictionpress so far.

HAHAHA ! Pete reminds me of a couple of my friends. I love it! It's hilarious.

lol !

lol. I'm loving it !

I don't really have that much to say so good job. (P.S the characters' names are awesome lol )

So far so good, I think I might like this.