very interesting...i'll be checking out you're other stories to see if they're as interesting as this one.

i like it i love the ending 'because im the only one that will listen' so true ive felt like that A LOT!

I love it. The end really ties it up and leaves you (well, it leaves me) with a strange feeling of knowing, but not knowing how to feel about it.

Or something like that.

In any case, I like it because it's got angst, but not the emo-teen-angst kind of poetry.

i really like this; it's very different and very real, easy to relate to. it's sad when the only person who will listen is yourself, i've been through that an di know it's hard. i think the AN completes it nicely, giving off an extra feeling of truth. eep up the good work.--Anne x0x

Yes! This is a rare piece of completely exquisite work. The last line ties the whole thing up. Change nothing.

i like this,i have simlar conversations...

The last two lines really ended the poem... I like this alot... no mistakes that I could find... well done!

Wow... I love it. Especially: How the hell do you know that? You have fun talking to yourself.Why are you avoiding the question? Do you really want the answer? Why do you keep doing that? Because you’re asking yourself. Then why are you answering? Because I’m the only one that will listen." Amazing. I can really relate, too. I talk to myself- and answer- all the time. I even talk outloud, lol. But only when I'm alone! Anyway, really really good work, I just love that ending! Keep writing!!

I liked it. I talk to myself a lot, too ^^. I especially liked the last couple lines--Then why are you answering?

Because I’m the only one that will listen.

Very good. Keep writing!