Too true in so many cases...

sad and well done... in the second to last stanza i dont like it... i dunno i feel like if she's hiding then he shouldnt see her... but that's just me i do like the the last two lines in that stanza though.. awesome job

Such a beautiful song. This was great, so powerful and painful. Well done, great writing! Merry Christmas! QueenVixta

Very good. You express the moment so very well. Two thumbs up from me.