it's quite good.. makes me wonder what would happen next.. few mistakes here and there but overall a very catchy story.. so keep it up! i would definitely keep on reading this.. unless of course if you stop writing!

Excellent story so far, as a previous user said there are a few mistakes conserning spelling etc. but apart from that the story is great. It's going right into my favourites.

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~Enjoy

so far its ok... makes the reader want to know whats going to happen next. 1st thing dat come to mind at the end of the chapter is if tis is going to be like terry brooks wishsong consep? keep it up, its making me wonder. ;D

Promising starts. A few grammatical blips here and there, but nothing to worry about. Keep up the good work.

I am hoping that I am able to finish this story, since that I'm still figuring out a way to finish most of my works. This would be my first time writing about a fantasy world about magics and wizards. So, enjoy it and please do r & r. Really appreciate it. thanx.