Argh i really wanna read this one, please reformat soon

Beahumut

aw. i love this. its true for me too. Thanks for the review by the way. I just had to check you out too!

Wonderful. Rhyming is sometimes forced, but your images are so bold and captivating. Keep writing.

AH, THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. You portray silence so well, I love this. The wording and imagery used are astounding, and this is going on my favorites list. You left me with a simple feeling of truth in silence; sadness, yes, but truth. Silence is truly "Pretty but diseased". I love it.

Ah, Silence is a beautiful thing. Don't get much of it... *sigh* Write on!

Wow...I never would have thought silence to be so inspiring! You took something and tied it within yourself It sounds awesome! o

Thank you very much for reading my poem! I look forward to reading the rest of your works!

MakatoMai

Its interesting to me how you turned the silence into an actual being (or character) they are as much apart of the words (the sound and noise of the rhythm) as the silent meaning of it.