I know how you feel with this one, The repetion gets across the point and the describtion gets across the image, a really well written piece of work, keep it up

So simply truthful and so effective, you have a lovely way with words and I really like the structure. x

*Huggles* ty for your last review sis. Love you too! *sniff* hehe. x

Holy cow . . . beautiful, just beautiful .It's so true! I love it. Great work!

That's neat perspcetive.

"Ugly is hiya, let me pretend I care"

I liked the line among others. Nice job! Write on!

I really like the true intention of where ugly should be at besides...physical features. :D The meaning is straightforward and feirce. Lovely job.

Sam

p.s. Thanks for the reveiw on 'Homophobia' its appreciated.

i liked it. the ending was quite sad though. (thnks for all the beautiful reviews!) :)