Why have you stopped this one? It's so fun!

Utterly captivating! Dominic, I am so excited to read the rest. Thank you for sharing your mind with mine. I hope that someday, you will share more with me. The imagery was beautiful, the characters round in character. Keep writing please!

Very very good work.Too early for any judgement or sweeping comments, but I want you to keep writing this so I can keep reading.