I can see your depression but I think your haiku is good coz haiku's can be hard to write sometimes (I am not good at writing poems unless they're acrosstic poems, soz for spelling mistakes).

-Animalgirl112

Perfect word choice. I really like this, and haikus aren't my thing at all! (They're normally.. bleh.) But yours is just... perfect. Really emotional.

~Maranwe

oh, i'm so sorry. i really am, i like your work... i've read quite a bit now, & i'm really enjoying it. you have talent. i hope things get better for you, this was a nice haiku & i'd like you to update. your work is good. : )

Bravo Laura. Bravo.

Good things shall come your way son young grasshopper! lol, but seriously, keep a look out for something lovely. Just don't be so down that you miss it! I hope you can get back to your writing soon; you have such talent. Back to the poem: With such a small amount of words, the feeling gets across in a big way. Beautiful writing.

~dancingintheshadows

Wow! That is truly amazing work

Keep up the good work

Relatable and you really captured the emotion in this moment. I could almost feel your pain. Keep on going!

Aw me too. *administers officious pat on head* Get some rest and give your mind some air. It'll come back soon! (It did for me. I just wrote a poem, Except that now that I've done so I won't be able to until another five months has passed, I guess.) Love Kat PS. Oh, don't trouble your pretty head, the poem's not too bad for being a little rusty. It describes your current situation well. Best of luck!

Thats awesome.

haha~ describing the pain i feel now~~ i thought it was pretty good, i mena almost all hiakus are professional in my opinion^^;; since i dont write them very much~

keep writing!

Writing it out might help tho. Great job! =(