I really love the chorus!

I love the way you put the swears in here. :D But, I think this poem kinda fits into everyone.

-freak from the corner

I really love this! Nice job.

this needs to flow a little better but other than that i really think it has a lot of potential (unlike my typeing! grg!)

Ooh, i can identify with this. I feel a bit like this atm, actually.

I love the first verse. Really nice.

Keep writing, and HAPPY HOLIDAYS!

Sorry, I'm a leetle beet hyper. Hehe.)

This is great, awesome job!

Great work. I say you already got your flow going. Lyrics are good and rhythm is great. An excellent job!

So, even your worst ones are great? YES!

Gosh, I need to talk to you!

"To act like I have a heart" - I like that line. Great job!