you should keep going

that was an amzing piece of work. you were very good at grasping the character subtely. ^^ nice job.

That was...so sad. Really good, tragic, and terribly sad. (Also, you reviewed my one-shot, Aqueous Sins, so thank you^_^ I'm glad you liked it!) You're a very good writer yourself.

deep but awesome all the same...wow that was really good.

Wow. That's pretty deep.

Very interesting and well written, this sounds like the end of a very interesting a thought provoking story, nice!

Creepy, and sweet all the same... I'm not quite sure how you pulled those together into the same peice, but the end result was very unique and an interesting read.

Though perhaps I should have waited for the sun to come up...