lol ha! intimate... and not intimate. I guess you can't reawlly describe it any other way... huh... lol, ya I like it. Just not... as ... ya... as... the rest of your... umm... poems...

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wow this seems so intimate, but yet not too intimate..almost as if its too private to be shared. i love the ending line: "it isnts happiness, but it comes close"- so seems so intense ...just wondering if its based off ur own real life experiences? anyway hope you had a gd xmas, and thanks for ur reviews they were so nice!

the last line is just amazing. I must say, this is too deep for my tastes. ;)

* noelle

wow.

i love the last line

and i love your review

but i disagree.

The only thing I didn't like about this was the review you left yourself, you maniac. It was beautiful and amazing and you know it. :-) As a side note, merry christmas! Call me sometime over break... or i'll make you the victim that initiates me into the new gang i'm thinking of joining. Or I could always just slit your ankles and bring back a body part like Emma was talking about... So call. For your sake. Cause i'm not unstable... Or Email. That would work too. Madeleine- Oh, and just so I keep with theme for the latin phrases, "Machina improba! Vel mihi ede potum vel mihi redde nummos meos! "

Woah... interesting one! very interesting.. has images that flicker into ones mind, then out as if too secretive to be there. interesting. well written!I love the way you reviewed this yourself: so cute! I didn't know you could do that.

Girl, that sucked. Next time proofread more than once before you post shit like that.