well that really does hit the mark and good job! like the verity of wordsLove you always and forever Dee

Lol I was expecting to see a one word poem b/c oddly that's what it says on your profile screen...it must be some kind of avarage...but ANYWAY, good poem...made me feel suffocated...which is actually good because I've never had a poem make me feel like I was dying...that sounds crazy but good job never-the-less

Sounds like one of my family reunions or move in day back freshman year of college, both memories burn like the fires of Hell... Anyways, to the review

For some reason, i find the word selection very appealing. i'm not sure if it's the culmination of the words or each of them, but it holds more power than it should for what each word means. i like it; simplicity can often be the best medium

what? and you never once mentioned feet!haha i like it.