| Reviews for Sway |
|---|
amanda.h 12/24/05 . chapter 1Wow. This poem is so easily relatable to. I love the way you wrote it too. It flows perfectly. |
i call it laughable 12/24/05 . chapter 1the title is perfect. i dont know. it fits so well, not to mention it's catching. i loved the first lines: "I think i might be/ flirting with you;/ laughing a little,/ or perhaps not enough." hahaha. pretty. |
Jen calculates 12/24/05 . chapter 1This is written so fast and spontaneously, I can practically see the thoughts in your head. Very nicely done. |
Procrastinating Fairy 12/24/05 . chapter 1...Ahh...yes. I remember the woes of stuff like that. Either way, it was a lovely piece. It hardly flowed and obviously didn't rhyme, but it had it's own scheme. I like it. _ |
randompoetry 12/24/05 . chapter 1This is good. I really like the phrase "Didn’t you see thatmy nails dug into my palmsas if to say‘I’m sorry’?" |
button-nose 12/24/05 . chapter 1It interests me that the person behind this is almost swaying (hence the title eh!) in and out of confusion and cant make up their mind! great work |