It feels like a chant after a while, and in that it has some charm.

However, it was segmented as some of your other works are, and it made me not really like it.

I like this, you have a nice style of writing. I really like the "I am tiredBut I am proudSo hit me again" that just seems so...I dont know, but its a great line (the whole poem is great.) Merry Christmas to you too! (I'm going to go check out voodoo queen right now!)

I like this poem. Disturbed by what it means, but it is quite good. If you like dark poetry I am sure I have a few things that might interest you. Anyways, great work, it was short and nice. *thumbs up*