 vampire-in-a-mirror 2006-07-13 . chapter 1I know this is the most basic of words, but it describes this poem so well, it's such a pretty poem :)It really conveys the emotion so well, and I know the feeling of aloneness that is communicated here.Well done on such a beautiful poem. |
 M. E. Griffin 2006-05-24 . chapter 1Wow. A very nicely contemplative piece. I can just see someone sitting and telling another this in a calm, collected sort of voice, as if they have been over it all before in their mind. Nice job. |
 Black and White Dreams 2006-04-16 . chapter 1absolutely gorgeous. this poem is so deep and full of emmotion! beautiful, beautiful job! love, Caitlin |
 crazy.chaotic.cool 2005-12-24 . chapter 1aww it says so much. i love it! |
 Arn 2005-12-24 . chapter 1a bit too "teen angsty" for me.
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