Interesting (and that is a good thing), makes me think, Thanks.

I love your poetry tonight (it's a poetry sort of night for me), and this is the one chosen for the review.

Like: "geisha/-hungry ice-eyes", "what do your all-american levi's think of that?", and the poem in general. My one comment is that the line "epicureanistic tastes overwhelm me" is akwards, and the wording seems out of sync with the rest of the poem. But other than that, I, the Rhyme Scheme Confined, worship blasphemously at your feet.

I liked this. The abstract style added a lot of flavor to this piece as well. Great work!

i adore the idea so much.

Wow. I like it a lot. Especially the last two lines.