wow... that was amazing this poem is aweosme continue writing more stuff like this and you will be famous

this poem is just amazing.the detail the theme the imagery is incredible.xp.s. thnx v much for ur review

awesome poem!

wow awesome descriptions.. i love the title.. it's great.. all the alcohol things too.. i love it

But that's the best kind, isn't it?

I wouldn't know. But I think maybe it is. This is more romance than others, and unique which makes it best.

Wow, really nice mood to this one. Sort of mixed up and confused, and really fast paced.

I like it! works really well. Keep writing!

'Drowning in sweet juicesSyrup laden enough to make you scream.' that was beautiful. the last verse was also amazing. loved it.

beautiful. i like it.

awesome metaphor.

Paints a clear image in your mind. Well done, keep it up.

I like this one a lot.

This is lovely - it's drenched with drink in a very blurrily sensual way. Your last three lines are beautifully written, but 'syrup laden...' was also very evocative.

And of course, it's all particularly pertinent to the christmas period!

Well done. :)

gorgeous imagery and wording. i love "syrup laden enough to make you scream." blurry-eyed and reckless with touch a hint of sexy = la combination parfaite.

i love the reference to drink in this, its an interesting twist to love ! great work x x

nice...you create some lovely vivid imagery.