Metaphors... Very nice. I love the umbrella. I'm picturing like a Pooh umbrella with like Piglett and Rabit and Tigger. Haha. Anyway but yeah this was really cute but sad. I like it. The part about playing in the puddles was really cool. It stuck with me.

Wow, good point. Awesome poem! Though, I actually like rain. Like, actuall rain. Not what this rain is standing for, you know? Awesome poem! -*-Incandescent Dreamer