col. wacko melissa and poor lil samantha! haha, its a 3 chapter story is it?? awesome, looking forward to the other chaps

Hey, followed this link off that lj community and I hope you continue it soon. Yeah, Mel does have a very interesting way of looking at the world but that's what makes a story interesting - interesting characters!... among other things. Sam seems like a whipped puppy.

Looking forward to chapter 2.

Bread

Wow, this is a great beginning! I hope you update this story soon! It's super! ^_^ Melissa is nuts! Whoot! Samantha can't die!

Oh my God I feel so awful for poor Sam! Melissa is just so harsh to her, whittling away at her confidence for all of those years by calling her fat etc - and Sam just seems like such a lovely person too. And I love how the characters develope in this chapter too - like at the beginning I thought that Melissa was just really honest and trying to stop her best friend from getting hurt - but as the chapter went on we found out just how controlling Melissa is. God she's just a leetle bit crazy isn't she. And that's such a horrible thing she does to Sam, she must be pretty mixed up if she can shoot her friend in the leg and kill and frame her for just to 'save her'. I've got to give it to the girl though, she did think things through beforehand. God I envy how you were able to incorporate those random phrases into this story too without making it sound disjointed. Well done! I also really envy how you've developed the characters and plot so much in one chapter and still keeping the characters of Melissa and Sam etc believable.

Well... that was strange... It really disturbed me. Melissa is incredibly twisted.

Yes. I want to see the fantasy. Update soon?

Gryph

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Nope you got it all right calybe. I really did not expect it. I think it also helped that I didn't read your summary. I was like "lala looks like your typical boy-and-girl stor--woah! Did her best friend just whip out a GUN? DId she just SHOOT her leg?" Yup... scared me a bunch. You nailed down the characters pretty well, and I think the twist added more depth to the characters as well.

I wonder if Samantha ever noticed that Melissa had a problem with controlling and manipulating people. It seems like she's had that problem for maybe several years. I get that from the example she used, with the poster and everything.

Wow... I seriously was not expecting that. *shudder* That's awful though, to find out the one and only "true" friend you had was only using you and now well, wants to kill you.

I'm curious to where you're going to take the plot though. But yes, the best of luck to you with the rest of the story =)

Happy New Year's and everything!