I really like how the poem is short and yet seems to get across so much and still flows really well, Keep it up

I really liked this one but can't quite pnpoint what i like about it. (Probably simplay that insommnia is a personal favourite of mine) The tone is really converstaional, but faintly bemused. Not particuarly productive critism i know. Very nicely written.

I love this so much! This is definitely going in my favourites! The rhythm works so well... i thought from the title it was going to be a bit cliched but its not... its sparky and original and the ending is perfect!WONDERFUL! :)

aww! that's sweet. I wuv it. (you: it's not s'posed to be SWEET! me: -_- is too)

btw I should be updating on 034 soon but at the moment I'm fully working on the second in my trilogy. I'm in the middle of total inspiration for Pitara's Choice so it might be a week or two before I update, then again, maybe tonight. Anywayz, great poem. Cya-Becca

"The questions always deemed true

Echo the dreams enchanted

They will always make you blue"

Lovely and graceful.

You spelt the title wrong ya noggin. But apart from that, this is very VERY enchanting. Like a lullaby, murmured on your way to sleep or something.

I love your pen name! It's so cute!

I liked this, it was great, and very beautiful. Write on!

Not bad for mummerings. Short, but to the point with an enchanting quality to it in the language. :)

Ooh! I like this. Very mystifying ;; very...enigmatic, maybay? Whatever it is, it works and works well. Very nicely written. ]

Thank you for reviewing my poem, 'I Swear We Were Infinite'. It truly made my Christmas brighter. Have yourself a 'Happy Holiday'!

With Love,Alyssa Jo

Nice. I liked it very much.

P.S.: Thank you for the reviews!

Hmm..I like it. Quite short and simple but it works, nicely done.

Nicley written, I really like the way it folws, great work!

"The questions always deemed true"- I adore this line. I like how you wove several pieces of advice together. The end result it quite effective. I enjoyed this. By the way, thank you for the review. Keep writing- Raizel Green