Sounds world-tired. And bitter and elegant. Nice. :) It did fit on your favorites list! Hurray. Thanks for that.

Hey you! You're right... this poetry isn't exactly my forte, but I'm not about to rip on you for it. You've got a style, and I like it! It's very spontaneous and unpredictable. Does well in countering my methodical and meticulous style. Keep writin', and see you around!

Oh, that's pretty. I like it a lot. Really a lot. I'm gonna save it to my computer. Yee! I have no idea what to criticize! It's too good!~iknowyourname (James... from LJ)

An understated poem with a power from within the words. The last verse intrigued me, it wasn't definite but an oxymoron itself, and unexpected.

It love the way this has depth! Great substance and I love your rhyming scheme.It pulls me in and makes me want to know more on this subject! Fab!

Button nose x x

Wow, that was cool... it didn't have a certain flow, but it didn't need one, it was amazing.

beautiful prose!

Merry Christmas! =D