This is really good. It's nice to see it's getting published, congratulations. I liked the idea of "red tears" and "other side of the mirror". It really catches my eye, lol.

hmm interesting...it could use a few spaces to get a sense of the beat but otherwise definitely good...kudos .-

Very deep and profoundingly symbolic. I loved it.

it's nice, but kind of sad to me. (:

Brilliance. This is pure brilliance.

Definatly one of your bests. This is beautiful. Sad, but beautiful. And very relatable. I think everyone's felt like they don't measure up at some time or another. You just have to keep fighting. sk8rgrl

Excellent. Superb. I like the way you've brought out the emotions behind it. And the metaphor with the mirror, rather than just having it be the reflection of who you want to be, it's just who you want to be With. I like that. A new twist on it, I believe.

Wow, I loved the last part - so beautiful!

It interests me that you give a glimpse as to what the subject is about while leaving it open to interpretation and makes it more relatable! Fantastic…keep it coming !

Button nose x x

powerful poem. i like the symbolical(ness) of the mirror. haha.

Merry Christmas! D