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| Stylo 2006-04-06 ch 1,  | abuseOh wow. Certain things from this poem/story are just amazing. "...Over-tight cloth in an overused shade..." "...Two cliches could birth an enigma..." "...(You could have been a Juliet)..." Those lines particularly hit me. Wow. I love this one. Me likey! ~*Bambam*~ |
| Bottled 2006-03-04 ch 1, | abuseWow. Amazing depiction of emotions and reality. It so applies for practically 90% of the male population. Love it. |
| thursdays and rain 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abusetwo cliches could birth an enigma - utter genious bo.Od & thanks for adding me on your favourites.. i am deeply honored c: |
| in theory 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abuse"Cynical vision.." I love that thought, it's so appliable to me hehe. And your voice is acidic, so compelling. |
| elvenstorm 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseExcellent poem, love your descriptions and thought processes. Really draws the scene out. Well done. |
| vcs 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abusewow, you really set the atmosphere and tone of the scene really well. Great peom |
| sloppy firsts 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuseoverwhelmingly powerful. |
| Croix 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuseThis was a lovely, lovey poem. It was very true, and I actually have been from this point of view quite a few times. Bravo. (: |
| San Carpenter 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuseLovely, as always. Was it written with something particular in mind, or was it just a passing idea? |
| breezy nostrils 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuseInsightful. I like how it's imagery provoking. Anyway, keep on going! |
| a lonely september 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abusethis was incredble. i really loved this poem, it was just so well-written & it had a great feel to it. |
| Complications 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuseyou start it, captivatingly. I got the imagery immediately... "overused shade" nice touch... but the whole thing was a nice touch; It's your style. It was more like a story than a poem, but brilliant either way.~ "prefect, fraud" ~; those are two words that come into my mind after reading it. |
| it really is a REVOLUTION 2005-12-25 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful and tragic. You describe this person with such utter detail that is somehow vague and revealing simultaneously. (You could have been a Juliet.) That line tugs on my heartstrings. Such a bittersweet statement. |
| Kaitlyn J. Richards 2005-12-25 ch 1, | abusewow, very nice, I like the format, it makes it different but really cool. and I love the view on this girl, how the poem describes very well someone very fake, and don't we all know one. good job. X Anita (please review back) |
| wildwolffree17 2005-12-25 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful and tragic. Very well written. |