Excellent song/poem. Creepy and disturbing- just what I like to read.

- Pricilla Grey

again superb. i like your blunt imagery and emotion. rock on.

at least I know he killed her...damn, dumb emo kids...lol..j/k...GREAT!

Crepy...what did he do? Kill her? *confused* But I liked it, very nice. My only piece of criticism is the line: "I could never forget you, a little wave upon my shore" If she means that much to him, would she really be a LITTLE wave? Overall, nice, though I would like to know what he does to her...*hint hint* D

that... was a little scary... but very interesting perspective, if i must say...

Spooky... but I liked it. )

Why the tense change at the end? What did he do to her?

I'm creeped out now. Nice song! Keep writing!

wow. well written. cool song! I haven't reviewed any of your stuff for AGES! *hangs head* me sorry, but I'm reviewing this now. I have been reading it! you changed styles for a while there, and I really like this one.. or is this the one you started with? you have so many poems that I don't know! :PI like this; it really has a sort of obsessed feel

Did he kill her?

I loved it by the way