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Reviews For: His Eyes
Cynthia Kaydence 2006-01-13 . chapter 1
The penguin stationary is what did it for me... *sniff* very touching. It pulled a multiple of heartstrings and it really got in my head.

*Hugs and love*

C.K.
chibicherrychan 2005-12-27 . chapter 1
Extremely touching and beautiful. It's quite believable in my mind that a confused person might throw his life away over simple regret. Pushing someone away can be easy, but the size of the gap left behind is most of the time unexpected and can be unbearable. And going back on that decision is much harder than one might think. Again, this was beautiful and it truly moved me.
Carrie Robinsin 2005-12-27 . chapter 1
that was one of your best pieces yet! i think i picked out some of the 'real life' stuff that you put in there. but beside that point, it was written really well and it was just...wow, i'm beyond words...i had tears in my eyes while reading it. *smiles* again, that was a very good story...wow...
multiples of six 2005-12-26 . chapter 1
That gave me goosebumps... so frikkin sad. Nicely written.
Rinna 2005-12-26 . chapter 1
**.

That was my immediate, out loud response, (in my grandparent's house I might add, though no one heard me), when I read the words "He's dead."

AGAHAHAGAGHGAH

This made me cry, seriously. Haruna came in to see what was wrong.

As in most of your stories, the characters are awesome and it's easy to sympathize with them, hence the emotional reaction. This story was very, very powerful. And upseting. That sucks. Just...yeah. But it's good, it just sucks. Does that make sense? Suire.

It was also very interesting, how I could sort of sense this amalgam of our lives with this fictional story. Excellent writing, in that sense (only one thing, though, it's spelled stalker, not stocker, but it's clear what you mean, so no big)

Egah. Okay. Calm, calm. This story was upseting. But that means it was good, so that's fine.
The Break and Repair Method 2005-12-25 . chapter 1
You have a great writing style. Once you start reading, you really get sucked in, :)

DM

p.s. the eleventh word of the second paragraph is the wrong homonym... but it's easy to understand anyway.
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