wow, j'en suis émue. très bien écrit!

C'est joli. Mais, une probleme...

I'm not a native french speaker and I have no idea if you are, so english! I always thought Au revoir had the connotation of seeing someone again. Whereas death cuts you off totally. Unless you mean that there'll be another meeting, after death.

Very pretty.

Wow... it took me a while to understand that.. but wow. It's beautiful.. It's just... wow. Je donne ma langue au chat. Amazingly beautiful.