i love the talks about facade. great poem!

whoa... impressive! "I fall through the paper-thin essence of my dreams" and "my papier-mache fantasy begins to rebuild itself" are awesome lines. i love the ending, too. "to fall" in a single line as the punch is really very effective. nice piece!

I love the way this is written; you've created a beautiful tone here. I especially like the 5th line. I can relate to this poem, and I think many others can as well. Great job.

Wonderful poem!! I especially like: and "my papier-mâché fantasy begins to rebuilt itself"It's really spell binding.good job!