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| PhoenixAngelink 2006-10-20 ch 1, | abuseoh! its awesome i love it, but the last part i love that a lot. like i said its awesome! |
| Glassed Rose 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuseI was begining to loose hope in finding a wonderful poem to read! But- This was an awesome poem! You organized it well, and the rhyming wasn't forced. Keep up the good work. -NekoCrayon |
| NotoriousBlue 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuseGood poem. |
| And All That Could Have Bee... 2005-12-25 ch 1, | abuseMy mouth is gapping open. That was absolutely wonderful! |
| Kaitlyn J. Richards 2005-12-25 ch 1, | abuseoh...wow. love the rhyme and the repition, and it has a great theme. excellent work. X Anita (please review back) |