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| The Whispering Wind 2008-06-04 ch 1,  | abuseThis is superb example of a perfect Christmas! I'm off to see what other things you have written! |
| Nub in Denial 2007-07-06 ch 1, | abuseReading this makes me want it to be Christmas even though it's July and I should be enjoying summer vacation. This was such a cute scenario. I feel like it should be made into a short film or something. It was just too... I dunno... magical? Oh, and romantic haha. Can't forget romantic. |
| ola 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abusevery much in the spirit of christmas. loved it. had a slightly magical feeling about it, which went very well with the christmas theme. enjoyed it immensely =) |
| Lady Psychic 2006-12-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really well written story. It puts me in the holliday spirit! |
| CeeJayStar 2006-11-27 ch 1, | abuseI still love it. After so long and so many times of reading it. xD Gosh... Thank you for making me smile. x |
| Prisoner-11 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abuseE! I like! This was a very sweet story that had me at the get go. |
| An Unwanted Accesory 2006-04-07 ch 1, | abuseLike the other stories you wrote this was amazing too. I don't really like one shots because I love learning about characters and seeing the plot thicken and finally unfold in a great finaly but I actually beleive that this story was MADE (I know it actually WAS but work with me here) to be a oneshot. just...wow I love all the stories you've written. and I loved the fact that it made Christmas look like a beautiful holiday where miracles happen because to tell you the truth I had honestly forgotten about the beauty of christmas.Analeigh |
| Dorkie 2006-03-13 ch 1, | abusei just found this, and even though it's not christmas, i still really like it. |
| TheSeer 2005-12-30 ch 1, | abuseWow. I mean, it was pure fluff, but it's the best fluff I ever remember reading. As one of those people you mentioned who reads your stories, thanks. Speaking of remembering, I don't remember ever hearing someone say "on accident" since I was six and my mother explained that isn't really how you say the opposite of "on purpose." Did he say it because he'd just spent several hours around a six-year-old, or was it a usual habit of his because he had umpty-zillion siblings and cousins, or is it just common usage where you come from and you didn't mean anything by it? I thought it was cute, anyway. |
| chibicherrychan 2005-12-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was an absolutely adorable story! Cute, cute, cute! The unlikeliness makes it all the more believable... does that make sense? I guess I really want to believe in beautiful love stories happening out of the blue but working to everyone's best interest... Thank you for the beautiful story of Christmas magic induced wonder! |
| pneumothorax 2005-12-27 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. I liked how you explained the actions honestly and rationally, so there really was no question as to why he was doing it. |
| mechante fille 2005-12-27 ch 1, | abuseLovely! The coincidences were great, and meeting Cole was like a karmic reward for him choosing to be nice even after his bad experience. Thanks so much for spending your Christmas typing this up for us! |
| ddz008 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuseGreat!Aw, I love it, it was so cute and perfect!Wonderful Christmas story! :) |
| Kittentits 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuseWow. This was really good. I'm sad it was only a one shot. *huggles* very nicely done! Happy Holidays! |
| Jak Refynae 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuseHey there, never read anything else by you yet but that was really good. I think you should continue it actually. I would love to see more! |